Snow

     A girl and her big brother left for the indoor rink for ice skating in harsh cold winer on boot. They collected two dollars for entrance around their dormitory and set off to the place. But the way to the place was long and then the blizzard had come to them. When they suffered that cold, a strange tall handsome man appeared and he gave his red warm scarf for her. This memory became unforgettable one than ice skating.

     I love this author’s expression. For example, in a scene that they collect coins, he or she describes coins in their dormitory as ‘spotted a rare stray dime nestled in a corner of one of the six rooms in our cold-water railroad flat’ I like how to chose verb.